The "Sword of Darkness"

[Hakaisha Abbadon]

[Sorry it took me so long to come up with a detailed description.]

The "Sword of Darkness" was crafted by the Shijin Kouryuu for the Hakaisha line as a reward for accepting his main element willingly. First wielded by the Archangel Hakaisha Noel, the sword had been witnessed by many mortals whenever it was used by it's bearer to aid human development, making it the subject of many mortal myths.

It has since been passed down to his only son Hakaisha Abbadon, whose intentions were to use the abilities of the sword to aid him in making Heaven a better place for all uprights.

Only a being that has control over chaos can wield the blade and access it's abilities. The only exception would be that there existed an anomaly of sorts; crafted, not born, with it's purpose for life initiated by all the Shijin. But such creature would be deemed an abomination...


Abilities:

- The wielder can peer into the past, present or future for a brief period in time, as long as there is a physical connection to the sword and the item/being in question.

- The sword can either suppress a victims magical usage or fully unleash them, depending on the situation at hand.

- The sword tends to randomly spurt out chaotic occurrences either in the midst of battle or at rest. Situations under these occurrences have left those who looked at this weapon as folklore to believe that the blade "has a mind of it's own."

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[History and Abilities subject to change]

[Sanada Tomo]

Okay. I have to add my changes now. I'm very sorry that you had to wait that long for a response.

Now that I have my computer, I can actively respond and reply to this.

Okay...Well, I'm going to have you get rid of this first ability. It makes no sense that a chaos sword would be able to use past, present, or future. I do believe we spoke about this.

The other two abilities are okay, though I'm going to send a rewrite of it to you for approval.

[Sanada Tomo]

This is what I'm willing to put up on the boards...:

The "Sword of Darkness" was crafted by the Shijin Kouryuu for the Hakaisha line as a reward for accepting his main element willingly. First wielded by the Archangel Hakaisha Noel, the sword had been witnessed by many mortals whenever it was used by it's bearer to aid human development, making it the subject of many mortal myths. It has since been passed down to his son, Hakaisha Abbadon, whose intentions were to use the abilities of the sword to aid him in making Heaven a better place for all uprights.

Only a being that has control over Chaos can wield the blade and access it's abilities. These abilities include the affect of suppressing a victim's magic or unleash large amounts of magic at once, although both take much skill and knowledge with the sword to do. Both affects--suppressing and unleashing--a being's magical power in its purest form is very dangerous and will most likely damage the wielder in some way, even severely depending on the personal strength of the wielder.

At one point, the sword appeared to have a mind of its own, spurting out chaotic energy at all of those who approached it, attacking, injuring, and possibly killing all those who have sought to use it without permission. This has revealed itself to be an affect of a chaos sprite inhabiting the sword. The sprite has since been removed and these occurrences have stopped.

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[Hakaisha Abbadon]

This is acceptable and greatly appreciated. I have no problems with this rewrite.